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can anyone grammar check this for me?This forum post has messages dated from 03/14/10 through 08/26/10, please be sure to read all the messages. If you feel it is old or outdated, please follow up with a question or comment and someone may be able to update it, or reply with newer information if you have it.
| can anyone grammar check this for me? Watching all these gorgeous bodies passing by all day long, already gives you the feeling you have arrived in Heaven. Even though tolerance has grown over the past years, the numerous villages and towns that surround Rio de Janeiro are certain worth visiting. If you have time it is advisable to take excursions to small colonial towns, like Parachior Buzios and The Saint Tropez of Brazil. The biggest unifying feature for Cariocas (as Rio’s residents are known) is video is wide sandy beaches. In fact a 60-mile stretch of hedonistic pleasure is yours for the asking. Sunning, Swimming, Flirting or just plain relaxing is a daily event Oceanside. There is a beach that caters to everyone. Copacabana and Ipanema are just two that are world famous. Some of the others such as Praia do Diablo (Devil’s Beach) or the far-flung grumari offer solitude and specialized activities. |
| Great Alice But, in the last sentence, the word Grumari should be capitalised shouldn't it ? Also, you don't suggest any commas. I can see several places where commas would be good. For example, in the third sentence after "time". Also did you mean to say "video-wide" in the fourth sentence Raye ? If you did, you need a hyphen there. |
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